Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

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Deteriorating nature, rising population and substandard schooling are among the major issues that nations around the world are dealing with. In the upcoming decade, apart from these India will
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have to address hurdles like water scarcity, healthcare management and urban management among the few which, if not addressed at the earliest, will have some serious repercussions. India, owing to its ineffective population management policy, has the
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largest number of individuals in the world. In the coming years due to
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an enormous population and scant reserves of adequate resources we have to deal with the threats of depletion of underground water levels, electricity generation crisis. According to a survey, by the end of 2021 plenty of metro cities in the nation will not have sufficient amount of water even for rudimentary needs. Effluents level in our country is escalating at an alarming rate.
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, India has 5 worst polluted cities among the top 10 of the world and
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leads to some threatening health problems. Speaking of which, our health care system is in pathetic condition as we are well short of the sufficient number of healthcare professionals and hospitals. Even in the education system we are not faring well either. The number of elementary school dropouts, majorly the females, is mammoth.
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the literacy rate has improved yet the pace is sluggish. To take on these hardships,
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Firstly India
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Firstly, India
has to come up with a stringent population-control policy which will act as the panacea for most of the social, economic as well as ecological evils.
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the education system should be given a complete revamp and emphasis should be laid to enhance the educational standards.
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, the government should adapt the policy of conserving and adequately utilising the natural resources.
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but not the least, Carbon footprints should be curtailed by switching to renewable sources of energy and
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diminishing the traffic congestion. To conclude, a part of India is pushing itself to emerge as a superpower whereas, the rest of it is still trying to withstand all these socioeconomic blows which is a strange paradox. We cannot keep on sweeping these evils under the carpet anymore and ought to amend those if we are seriously eyeing to become global leader in the coming times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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