In many countries children are getting fatter and less fit day by day. Why is it so and suggest solution.
Nowadays, obesity began to be more common in young generation, with lack of exercise. The problem of
this
issue is the high number of fast Linking Words
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and video games, and the solution would be a balanced Use synonyms
diet
and daily exercise as well.
One of the main reasons children are getting fatter and less fit is, because of the high number of fast foods they eat, and the endless hours spent in front of the TV. Restaurants Use synonyms
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as McDonalds, KFC or Burger King can be found in almost every corner with an extremely good merchandising, which leaves the mouth watering and it is not easy to avoid. Linking Words
Furthermore
, video games became the main interest of almost every boy and girl, while the enquiry for any other sport is at a low rate. Linking Words
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, the highest proportion of youngsters in my country spends their money on Linking Words
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However
, a solution for Linking Words
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problem is developing a balanced Linking Words
diet
, which is high in fibre, proteins and it consists mainly fresh vegetables and fruits. Parents should warn their children about the possible diseases fast Use synonyms
food
could create. I think that parents have the biggest influence on their child and they should take care of them. Use synonyms
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,
besides
the balanced Linking Words
diet
, little ones should be sent to different centres where they can do sports, Use synonyms
instead
of laying on the sofa and playing video games. Linking Words
For example
, they should go to swimming, playing basketball or even jogging.
In conclusion, I believe that there are many risk factors which are leading to a bad lifestyle, but Linking Words
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can be avoided by a regular sport schedule and great Linking Words
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