The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The discussion about whether or not the state should invest more in prevention rather than treatment of diseases is very controversial. There are people on both sides of the statement who have very strong views. Personally, I think that prevention should be made a priority when it comes to
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In conclusion, I strongly believe that more effort and money should be put on well-being issues, prevention rather than cure by the government.Linking Words
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