Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? how can the poor be helped?

There is no doubt that these days the
poverty
is affecting a lot of countries. The question is, what
is
Suggestion
are
the main reasons for the
poverty
in the world and how we can
support
the poor people? In
this
essay,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am going to discuss the reasons for
poverty
and the
support
ways for the
poverty
comunity
a group of people living in a particular local area
community
. In terms of
problem
Suggestion
the problem
problems
, the war is the major reason for the
poverty
in the world. The main reason given
support
this
claim is that the war countries have more
poverty
rate
than other country. To illustrate, the
poverty
rate
in Syria is
increased
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increasing
rapidly during the war in the
last
5 years.
In other words
, recent
studys
be a student; follow a course of study; be enrolled at an institute of learning
study
studies
shows that the
safty
the state of being certain that adverse effects will not be caused by some agent under defined conditions
safety
countries have
less
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a less rate
rate
of poor people. 
This
is because the advantages of the tourism and
foucsing
the concentration of attention or energy on something
focusing
fussing
faxing
for
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in
improve
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improving
the economy.
Additionally
, some counties are suffering from
weak economic system
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a weak economic system
the weak economic system
which
can not
can not
cannot
help them to improve and
creat
make or cause to be or to become
create
a new job
oppertunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
for the people.
For example
, African country
have
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has
less
oppertuinty
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
opportunities
in industry than
Euorpe
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European
Europe
countries.
However
, helping poor people should start from the
comunities
a group of people living in a particular local area
communities
.
Goverments
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Governments
Government's
shlud
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
stablish
set up or found
establish
a help
programs
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program
that
comunity
a group of people living in a particular local area
community
can
involved
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involve
with it.
Moreover
, poor people need
more educational
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more education
support
that can help them in their
futur
the time yet to come
future
futures
career. Educational programs should offer a help for the people who
can not
can not
cannot
study
becouse
for the reason that; on account of
because
finiance
involving financial matters
financial
finance
reasons.
To
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In
conclusion, it is evident that the
poverty
is increasing at a rapid
rate
for different reasons. The
goverments
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
must ensure steps are taken to prevent
this
phenomenon from deteriorating
further
.
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