Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays,
noise
pollution has been one of the most controversial issues. Some individuals think they have a right to produce
noise
if they want, whilst others do believe that the government should have a strong measure to strictly control the level of
noise
. These views will be discussed in
this
essay. On the one hand, there are some reasons why the
noise
being created should be limited by the government.
Firstly
, living in a noisy place can have
harmful impact
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a harmful impact
harmful impacts
on people’s health. A person living nearby industrial zone,
for example
, may have unhealthy sleep and was woken up at midnight by intrusive sounds from
factory
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the factory
at its night shift. If that situation lasts too long, the victim will suffer from physical and mental illness,
such
as trauma and insomnia.
Secondly
,
noise
may affect people’s study or work performance.
For instance
, a university student will have no concentration on preparing for his final examination in case his
next
-door
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
neighbour's
neighbour
always singing out at night.
On the other hand
, some render that they are at liberty to make
noise
as much as they can because of some several reasons. Sometimes, producing
noise
is considered as a type of entertainment. In order words, it helps persons to bring joys themselves and relax after a great deal of hard-working time. Take one example
,
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,
some young adults are likely to relax by listening IDM or rock
music even
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music, even
though they do know that can disturb their
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
. What’s more, the belief that
noise
is a part of industrialization and modernization in cosmopolitan cities. The urban citizens,
therefore
, could be inevitable and acquainted with
noise
and traffic jams.
However
, we can have
optimal solution
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an optimal solution
the optimal solution
in order to reduce
noise
by installing soundproof wall and glasses. In conclusion, while there are some reasons that
noise
shall be
diminished but
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diminished, but
I personally think people have
freedom
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the freedom
to make
noise
in case it does not have negative influences on the others.
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