Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays,
noise
pollution has been one of the most controversial issues. Some individuals think they have a right to produce Use synonyms
noise
if they want, whilst others do believe that the government should have a strong measure to strictly control the level of Use synonyms
noise
. These views will be discussed in Use synonyms
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essay.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why the Linking Words
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being created should be limited by the government. Use synonyms
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, living in a noisy place can have Linking Words
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on people’s health. A person living nearby industrial zone, Suggestion
a harmful impact
harmful impacts
for example
, may have unhealthy sleep and was woken up at midnight by intrusive sounds from Linking Words
factory
at its night shift. If that situation lasts too long, the victim will suffer from physical and mental illness, Suggestion
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noise
may affect people’s study or work performance. Use synonyms
For instance
, a university student will have no concentration on preparing for his final examination in case his Linking Words
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always singing out at night.
a person who lives (or is located) near another
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, some render that they are at liberty to make Linking Words
noise
as much as they can because of some several reasons. Sometimes, producing Use synonyms
noise
is considered as a type of entertainment. In order words, it helps persons to bring joys themselves and relax after a great deal of hard-working time. Take one exampleUse synonyms
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some young adults are likely to relax by listening IDM or rock Accept space
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music even
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. What’s more, the belief that a person who lives (or is located) near another
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noise
is a part of industrialization and modernization in cosmopolitan cities. The urban citizens, Use synonyms
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noise
and traffic jams. Use synonyms
However
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optimal solution
in order to reduce Suggestion
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noise
by installing soundproof wall and glasses.
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freedom
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the freedom
noise
in case it does not have negative influences on the others.Use synonyms
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