A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university.He/She has asked for your advice about studding this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Give details of the course you took at the university Explain why you recommend the university Give some advice about to apply
Dear Husan,
I hope everything is okay with you. I know that you are thinking about studying the same
course
as me, With great desire I will comment on this
course
to you.
It is worth starting with significant details about this
course
, this
is a preparatory course
in English at an International university. They have 2 operating modes, the first is in the morning from 8:00 to 13:00 and evening from 17:00 to 22:00.The lesson takes place 3 times a week after the end of the semester you can receive a certificate of completion of the course
. I have been studying this
course
for 2 years; it is held in largest classroom and that's all you need to know.
From my point of view, the reason for the establishment of the university are very significant, therefore
there are very professional teachers with extensive work experience, cozy and beautiful classrooms , friendly and helpful teachers , you can quickly master all the materials in this
course
. Moreover
,it is very close to your home.
Regarding the application, you can go to their official website and register yourself, there very easy and there are detailed instructions about this
. You need a passport, your personal address and identification to apply for this
course
; if you have any questions, feel free to write to me .
I hope you all the best.See you soon!
Warm wishes,
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To improve task achievement, ensure that you provide more detailed and specific advice about studying the subject. For instance, you could mention particular aspects of the course that were most beneficial to you or specific study techniques that helped you succeed.
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Use a wider range of cohesive devices such as conjunctions, pronouns and synonyms to improve the flow of your ideas. This will help in making your paragraphs more tightly knit and your overall message more coherent.
Coherence & Cohesion
Try to structure your letter with a clearer logical progression. Beginning with an introduction, followed by distinct paragraphs for each main point (course details, recommendation, application advice), and concluding warmly can enhance readability.
Coherence & Cohesion
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