Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve, other believe that individuals also can do some things to solve these problem. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Few people believe that environmental disasters are greater than what individuals could tackle while some believe that individuals can still contribute their own quota to solve
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with, challenges faced by people in their respective communities are enormous, but can be tackled through cooperation and adhering to rules and regulations. " No challenge is insurmountable ". Youth in the community should take responsibility and desist from awful habits
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as depositing trash in rivers or drainages which will in turn block drainages and cause flooding.
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a major disaster, and has rendered many families homeless.
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, the Government should prioritise environmental problems and allocate a significant amount to it in the budget,
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will suffice and relief residents from the hardship they undergo.
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, there should be stringent rules and stiffer punishment for perpetrators of environmental problems
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as pollution.
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, burning of refuse which affect the climate and cause green house effects,
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throwing of empty bottles in rivers.
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, offenders could be made to pay fine or serve jail term to serve as
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Apparently, they are the major cause of these problems. In my own opinion, both youths and Government have major roles to play, but I think individuals should not be destructive and take charge in order not to sabotage their leader's efforts. In conclusion, we should not flout Government orders and ensure proper hygiene and
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we should maintain a high level of decorum. ." Cleanliness is
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to Godliness" and "prevention is better than cure"
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