Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

Some people believe that
music
will make people from different cultures and ages to stick together. In my opinion, I agree that
music
will bring the unity to each other because
music
is universal and give the same chance for people to listen. It is clear that
music
can be
listened
detected or perceived by the sense of hearing
heard
in all the countries around the
world
. Every country has their own type of
music
, either general
music
or cultural
music
.
Likewise
, for the general
music
such
as pop, R&B, jazz, classic are provided in every country,
thus
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thus, although
although
every
people
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person
have
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has
difference
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different
cultures, they can still listen to the
music
.
For instance
, in developing countries
such
as Indonesia and India, which have different backgrounds of
life including
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life, including
the culture, but
young
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younger
generations in both of the countries tend to like the same pop
music
from America.
Therefore
,
music
is universal for every person in the
world
without the exception.
On the other hand
,
music
also make
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also makes
the same chance for people in different ages to listen. There is no a restriction
in
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on
music
for its listener, all the genres can be
listened
detected or perceived by the sense of hearing
heard
by all people.
For example
, pop
music
can be listened for both young and old generations. In Indonesia, students and parents have the same occasion to
listen
perceive (sound) via the auditory sense
hear
the same
music
and song and it does not need the permission from the other people. In conclusion,
music
is the essential part
in
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of
the
world
, because there is no specific rule to enjoy the
music
.
Likewise
,
music
is not the sensitive part of
life
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life, such
such
as religion, nationality, and language.
Thus
, it can bring the togetherness for all the people around the
world
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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