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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree o disagree?

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Trendy cloths and treads for appearance has been kept on changing from many centuries and it has been always a hot topic of all the time. Many people believe that it refers to one's nature, depending upon their dressing sense. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both sides of view that if we can know about a
person
's nature and personality based on their look they carry.
firstly
Suggestion
Firstly
, I think that, people mostly pick the clothing of the current fashion which is available in the markets.
For instance
, If a movie star appears in a film with different or more tawdry choice of cloths, even if, it is not the current fashion, people start to pick that kind of dresses to visualise themselves like them. Whereas, appearing like someone else does not help describing about the inner
person
.
On the other hand
, people tend to make their opinion according to their job or their profession, which often leads them to suit up themselves like professionals.
Although
, we can find out their mind-set as how they look, to exemplify that, if a
person
 wearing a really extraordinary blazer with power tie, we can easily say that he may owns a business,
Moreover
, if a
person
 is wearing a simple shirt with a tie can be classified as a general employee. In conclusion, I will slightly disagree the fact that by a glance of a look in one's appearance, we can know about their character,
However
, the we can assume of a culture by it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • garments
  • traditional attire
  • sartorial choices
  • expressive style
  • cultural identity
  • psychological implications
  • non-verbal cues
  • globalization
  • perceptions
  • professional demeanor
  • societal norms
  • economic constraints
  • subcultures
  • fashion movements
  • individualism
  • stereotype
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