Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
Nowadays, there is a growing trend of having children later of some couples.
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There are a number of reasons why young adults have been choosing Linking Words
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, since the job market is really competitive, Linking Words
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couple is required to spend whole their time to focus the employment, which is a stronger foundation to promote the position on their career in near future. Linking Words
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, if young people defer the parenthood to devote for their employer, Linking Words
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will contribute to increasing their salaries and wages, Linking Words
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, since they understand the magnitude of children rearing responsibilities, Linking Words
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feeding and teaching babies are required a great deal of patience and hard work, which discourages many would-be parents.
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there are a lot of disadvantages of health, but it cannot be disclaimed that some positive impacts on the society and families is enormous. On the one hand, the society developers said that the children receiving more comprehensive education when they are born from the experienced parents, Linking Words
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will be conditioned conductive for the world to grow up in the future. Linking Words
On the other hand
, if the mothers decide to have children when they are over thirty years old, Linking Words
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lead to increasing health risks. Linking Words
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, in my country, Vietnam, there are many cases of the children with the birth defect, which lead to turning upside down of these families.
In conclusion, the tendency to have children at later ages is caused by a number of factors Linking Words
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as the competitiveness of the job market for young adults, and both the positive and negative impacts of it can be seen in families and society.Linking Words
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