A neighbour recently invited you to a special party. You intended to go, but at the last minute were unable to attend. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter apologise for not going to the party explain why you didn’t go suggest a way to make up for missing the party

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Dear Mr.Altıok, I am writing to apologise for missing a special party at your house yesterday. I believe that you must understand my situation after I tell the story about my mom and my dad’s surprise. They suddenly visited us because they missed their grandchild who had a birthday

last

week and they missed it at that time.

Additionally

, they brought lots of toys to Arya which is my daughter’s name.

Consequently

, she was very happy to see them,

as a result

this

we could not come to your party. As you know we had a plan to come with Arya because we haven’t got anyone to look after her.

Moreover

, my father did not feel

himself

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good after six-hour car drives. It is hard to leave alone to him at that conditions.

Furthermore

, he has a heart problems. If something happens, I will stay with them in case. I really wanted to attempt to your party but I believe you put yourself into my position and I know you did the same thing. The second time we will come to your organisation, please do not hesitate to contact us. Take care of yourself. Kind regards, Salih Zeki Köni

Submitted by salihzekikoni on Tue Jan 09 2024

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

200 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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