A poor infrastructure hinders under developed countries from progressing and modernizing. Some people think this should be the first problem tackled by foreign aid. To what extent do you agree?

Most developing countries fail to grow beyond a certain level because of the lack of adequate

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, some people argue that foreign assistance should be primarily used to tackle

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these problems

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idea. While I do admit that

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is important, it is not the only factor determining the success of a nation. One of the main problems that plague developing and underdeveloped countries is the lack of adequate

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.

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, many of them do not have a good network of roads or railways.

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, they do not have enough power supplies or water distribution systems. Needless to say, foreigners do not want to invest in

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countries.

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development

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requires a great deal of capital. Since poor countries cannot afford to invest that kind of money, they have to struggle with inadequate

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. Unfortunately,

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limits their growth prospects. Developed countries are unlikely to invest in developing countries that do not have good

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. That explains why foreign investors are bullish on countries like China where they have excellent

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conducive for growth.

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, few entrepreneurs want to invest in African countries where the

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hardly exists. Needless to say, while China is on the path to growth, African nations are still struggling.

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, the argument that foreign assistance should be primarily used for building

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certainly holds some water. Even so, it is preposterous to utilize the entire aid received from abroad for building

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alone will not ensure the

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of

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, a nation needs healthy and educated citizens capable of giving back to the society. For

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reason, it is important to invest in areas

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as education and health.

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to building schools and hospitals the government must ensure that quality education and

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health care

are provided at these places for free or at affordable rates. Social welfare schemes should

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be given a push. In conclusion, I contend that

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development

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is certainly important and a certain portion of the foreign assistance should be used for

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purpose.

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, it is equally important to invest in key human

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areas

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as education, healthcare and social welfare.