Some construction work is being done on the street where you live for the last couple of days. The noise from the work is loud and it disturbs you. Write a letter to your local council complaining about the noise. In your letter, introduce yourself explain how the noise is causing problems to you suggest solutions to the problem You do NOT need to write any addresses.  Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I trust you are doing well. The purpose of

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letter is to notify you about an unpleasant

noise

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of construction work

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causing severe disturbance to me. Myself Ruchin Patel, and I have been living near Eglinton Subway Station for over three years now.

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that, I am working in an automotive manufacturing company as a Senior Design Engineer in Concord, ON. Being a Design Engineer, I often prefer to work from home.

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, since the construction site has

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near the subway station, I am struggling to focus

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the loud

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of drilling, hand tools and road-cutting saws, all working at the same time.

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, many of these

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start working at 7 am and work until almost 9 PM for at least four days in the week.

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, I would like to request you to send a letter to the management of the construction company and inform them about

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issue and advise them to use a

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level detector, so if the

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exceeds 65 DBS

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they should

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a few

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equipment

to ensure a pleasant and quiet atmosphere. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Ruchin Patel

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Coherence/Cohesion

Make sure to separate different ideas into clearer paragraphs for improved readability.

Task achievement

Provide a bit more detail on how the noise affects your daily life specifically, to strengthen task achievement.

Task achievement

The letter effectively introduces yourself and provides context about your situation.

Coherence/Cohesion

The greeting and closing phrases are both polite and appropriate.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

202 words

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