Many people are copying famous celebrities from magazines and TV. Why is this happening? Do you think it is a good idea to copy celebrities?

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Nowadays

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healthy proportion people are stealing well-known celebrities from journals and magazines and TV as well.People think that if they imitate people who are very famous or idol people in any field, they may think it is the best way to show their fan towards

this

person. To start with

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many people consider that if we imitate these person characters and their

lifestyle

we can get a reputation in the society.To be more precise we can gain more fame and well-known for around us.

For example

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some people wear the sport idol people forms in their daily life or when they play any kind of sport.They think it is a clear sign of their fan of

this

person.According to research in the US showed that twenty percent of high school girls are keen on to put on garments which are very similar to their famous actress.I think they are guessing if we follow their

lifestyle

and wear their clothes we can gain reputation equally with them in the society.

Moreover

, it is the very negative idea from my perspective.

This

is because if our youngsters are follow to only famous

lifestyle

and celebrity our traditional customs may disappear in a not too distant future.

In other words

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famous people have tended to follow the up to date trend and popularity in terms of clothing and in their daily life for the most part.It can urge adults to give up our customs and traditions.To take an example of France adults

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they are trying to follow American

lifestyle

and their traditions.

As a result

this

their some traditions are changing now.To be more precise

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in Christmas day they wore their national clothes about five years ago

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however

now they only wear garments which are currently in trend.It is undeniable

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a clear sign of the effect of national traditions, I guess. To conclude, the above given arguments and examples could convince me to resist

this

view because of disappearing of national customs and traditions.

Submitted by Узбек Миллий on Mon Jun 15 2020

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