Some people say that vertical city is best where people can live, while others say that horizontal cities are better. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
According to some people's preferences, the main reason for being successful in career is related to tertiary education.
However
, their opponents opt for choosing job
after graduating the high school. The former thought is more sensible for me because of possessing enough chance to be recruited.
More and more people tend to set up jobs for themselves just after finishing their studies at high school. May be they are considering only money related sides in mindSuggestion
a job
,
Accept space
,
instead
of continuing their academic life. It can bring more money for them so as to owning multi
-Suggestion
a multi
flate
houses or wealthy cars. It has having a surface without slope, tilt in which no part is higher or lower than another
flat
float
advantegous
sidegiving an advantage
advantageous
advantages
,
being more independent and becoming the breadwinner of their family Accept space
,
for instance
. Moreover
, they are highly likely to increase their experience. The eldest child in family is prone to pursue this
type of career.
When it comes to people who chose academic path
they are likely to possess flourishing future. Because in well- developed countries commercial companies employ only well-educated and qualified Suggestion
the academic path
an academic path
job
seekers for the managerial duties. Such
group of people can be promoted for their enthusiasm and productivity in their field, I guess. Furthermore
, there are always higher level
of competition in Suggestion
a higher level
job market
Suggestion
the job market
,
so Accept space
,
most of employees who
are lacking some academic strategies correlated to their Suggestion
most employees who
job
will probably left
their places for others, I think. Students, who have finished university or college studies with high marks as a foreigner recruited by "ZTE" company because of insufficient number of well- educated native student in China 2012.
To conclude, both of way can be true for their owners because of Suggestion
leave
needs
or Suggestion
the needs
their
willing to continue tertiary education. In my view, it will be Suggestion
they're
smart choice
.Suggestion
a smart choice
the smart choice
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