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Some people are of the opinion that there should be a car-free day once every month, on which no private vehicles are allowed on the road. Discuss the advantages and possible disadvantages.

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In the modern
world everyone
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world, everyone
 prefers to use the private vehicles, but few people have suggested that
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at lease once in a month everyone should use public transportation.
This
 essay will cover the possible advantages and disadvantages of
this
 topic. In
this
 competitive world
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,
first
 and foremost private vehicles have become a symbol of standard of living and
also
 people have a great passion towards bike and car so they use automobiles without thinking about the consequences.If everyone in the socket is ready to consider any public vehicle as a mode of transportation at least a day in a month will help to reduce the pollution in a minimal way because it will help to reduce our contribution of carbon monoxide to our environment.To avoid the traffic conjunction on of the main street, all industries coming under Infopark is started common cab facilities for employees. Not only the pollution issue will resolve, but
also
 can save money spend on fuel. Some contradictions have
this
 statement, during the tight working schedule
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 employees face difficulty in waiting for the common vehicle for a long time and not able to reach on time.Another impact is that
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the limited transportation cannot meet the requirement of the general public in a different way like limited privacy and seating
capacity it
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capacity, it
 will mainly
effect
have an effect upon
affect
 the senior citizens and physically disabled persons
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 To conclude, every coin has two sides and
that is
 similar in the case of the public vehicles.Pros and cons have same
weightage
the product of voltage and current
wattage
.It is the responsibility of each individual to take care of the unwanted usage of vehicles.
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