It is often said that government spend too much money on projects to protect wildlife,while there are other problems that are more important.do you agree or disagree?

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Government
plans an increasingly significant role in every field for development of their domestic world.It is always a
debateable
open to doubt or debate
debatable
issue that
government
used
huge amount
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huge amounts
a huge amount
of
money
for wild
animals
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animal
projects for the protection of
wildlife
.
However
,
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there are numerous problems that are very essential.I agree with the given
statement but
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statement, but
some extend.I will discuss it in upcoming sections.
To begin
with
,
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animals are crucial for our ecosystem and they
also
enhance the beauty of our environment.It is the responsibility of the
government
to spend
money
on animals so that they
also
live their
life
and easily survive.
Moreover
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Moreover, government
government
should use
government
income for making policy in the favour of
wildlife
.Animals
also
have the right of living a happy
life
.
For instance
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,
the Hindu newspaper
always write
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always writes
the article about
wildlife
protection as well as they encounter the human beings to do the same thing.
On the other hand
, there are
large range
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a large range
of other issues in
country
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countries
the country
which are very essential rather than spending
money
on animals.
Firstly
,
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,
individuals are unemployed due to
this
problem they cannot easily survive in their
life
.
Secondly
,
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other problems have serious matter
,
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individual claim that issues like unemployment
,
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,
pollution
,
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,
transportation related problems
,
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,
child labour and many more.These all are serious one and due to solve
this
cause
government
should take policies and spend
money
in
this
type of issues.
For example
,
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,
in many nation masses are very poor and they do not have
money
or home for living as well as they are hungry for many days.
This
is only created by the
neglection
of the
government
. In conclusion
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,
in my point of
veiw
a way of regarding situations or topics etc.
view
wildlife
is
important but
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important, but
humans
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human
human's
life
is more precious.
In addition
,
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,
due to solve
this
issues
government
should spend on
money
on necessary things which is beneficial for human beings.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Wildlife conservation
  • Biodiversity
  • Ecosystem
  • Human welfare
  • Poverty alleviation
  • Resource allocation
  • Cost-benefit analysis
  • Non-governmental organizations (NGOs)
  • Ecotourism
  • Sustainable development
  • Preservation
  • Endangered species
  • Habitat destruction
  • Climate change
  • Environmental stewardship
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