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In the past, buildings often reflected the culture of a society but today all modern buildings look alike and cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar. What do you think is the reason for this, and is it a good thing or a bad thing?

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The images illustrate how City Hospital has changed during 2007 and 2010. Overall, the location of the City Hospital remained unchanged trough out the whole
timeframe
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time frame
, while the six bus stop facilities on the
east-side
of the eastern part of a city e.g. Manhattan
eastside
 and
north side
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the north side
 of the Hospital Road been removed and made into a Bus Station in the South-west of the city hospital. In the year 2007, there was only one parking facility on the
south-east
the compass point midway between south and east; at 135 degrees
southeast
southwest
 wing of the City Hospital for public and hospital staff uses.
Therefore
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, it has been expanded with one additional parking on the east side of City Hospital right beside the Ring Road. The old parking still used by the hospital staff while the new one is for the public. By 2010, the Hospital’s Ring Road, City Road and Hospital Road remained unchanged.
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, there are two roundabouts added, on each junction of the road to make the road user easily reach the Bus Station.

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