In the past, buildings often reflected the culture of a society but today all modern buildings look alike and cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar. What do you think is the reason for this, and is it a good thing or a bad thing?

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The images illustrate how City Hospital has changed during 2007 and 2010. Overall, the location of the City Hospital remained unchanged trough out the whole

timeframe

Suggestion

time frame

, while the six bus stop facilities on the

east-side

of the eastern part of a city e.g. Manhattan

eastside

and

north side

Suggestion

the north side

of the Hospital Road been removed and made into a Bus Station in the South-west of the city hospital. In the year 2007, there was only one parking facility on the

south-east

the compass point midway between south and east; at 135 degrees

southeast

southwest

wing of the City Hospital for public and hospital staff uses.

Therefore

, it has been expanded with one additional parking on the east side of City Hospital right beside the Ring Road. The old parking still used by the hospital staff while the new one is for the public. By 2010, the Hospital’s Ring Road, City Road and Hospital Road remained unchanged.

However

, there are two roundabouts added, on each junction of the road to make the road user easily reach the Bus Station.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

154 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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In the past, buildings often reflected the culture of a society but today all modern buildings look alike and cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar. What do you think is the reason for this, and is it a good thing or a bad thing?

Fully explain your ideas

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

over population of urban areas has lead to numerous problems. identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that government and individuals tackle these problems.

In today’s world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantage of owing a smartphone outweigh the disadvantage?

The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on alien planets. Some people think that the government is wasting money and should spend money addressing the problems of the public. To what extent do you agree?

Due to the rapid development and expansion of supermarkets in some countries many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities.