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Some suggest that young people should take a job between school and the university. Discuss what advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this.

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Many people believe that young people should work for a while after school before going to
university
. There are several advantages and disadvantages to
such
 an approach. The
first
 advantage of employing young people before
university
 is developing their experience at work.
This
 experience will assist them to gain multi-life skills
such
 as practical skills, leadership skills, and social skills. Developing an individual’s communication skill will teach them how to create a positive workplace environment with their colleagues to increase positive production at work. These skills will prepare young people for future requirements to succeed in life. Another advantage of working before studying in higher education is young people will be more financially independent by relying on their own funds to finance their higher education.
For instance
, young people's salaries will assist them to pay for their education needs
such
 as courses, transportation, food, housing, and books.
On the other hand
, working before setting off to
university
 will decrease studying motivation for young people. ]
For example
, they will face numerous challenges in overcoming study difficulties like dealing with technology.
As a result
,
this
 will affect their
academic educational
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academic, educational
level which
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level, which
 leads them to frustration in studying causing them to give up.
In addition
,
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,
 employing young people before going to
university
 will affect them negatively because they will not be able to collect a variety of certificates to be an employee in a high position. In conclusion, there are several advantages and disadvantages of employing young people after school before entering
university
.
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