You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. What could be done to encourage people to buy local products? An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online? Write at least 250 words

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Nowadays,

trend

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the trend

of online shopping has increased rapidly

amoung

in the middle of

among

youths. They prefer to purchase things online rather than going to the market. In my view, online purchasing is directly affecting the market of local products available nearby. We will discuss benefits and loss causing by shopping on

internet

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the internet

. In our country,

percentage

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the percentage

of youths are more as compared to people of other

ages which

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ages, which

are currently involved in working or studying in different places. Due to lack of time, they are unable to

go the shops and

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go to the shops and

buy the required products which leads them to grab materials from online. As shopping on

web

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the web

is more convenient and time saving. They can choose the product as per their requirement using different filters available on many sites and

same

Suggestion

the same

also

delivered to their address without any

hastle

an angry disturbance

hassle

This

also

helps companies and seller to expand their business globally and earn more using online selling. Every coin has two sides.

Similarly

, there are many drawbacks of

this

habit of web purchasing.

Consumer

Suggestion

The consumer

is unable to identify the actual fabric,

color

a visual attribute of things that results from the light they emit or transmit or reflect

colour

and size of the product shown online which does not fulfil the purpose of the consumer. Sometimes companies sell duplicate product

instead

of actual pictures shown on shopping apps. There are some fraud sellers as

well which

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well, which

easily sell their products online. In the end, only buyer has to suffer

alot

Suggestion

a lot

mentally and

monetary

Suggestion

monies

moneys

money

due to fraud caused by the companies online. In my opinion, local sellers should know about the current fashion and trending products and these options should be available at reasonable price to attract more customers from nearby

arears

a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)

areas

Good

Suggestion

Better

quality and more variety of products would increase the number of people to buy things from local markets only.

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