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The news is an important source of knowledge for all of us about the world, especially in this era of technology. Journalists are mainly responsible to bring this news to us but not all of them are true their responsibilities and ethics. How much can we trust the journalists?

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At the present time, with the accessibility of the modern technology, we can easily get the latest headlines on our electronic devices to know what is happing in the world. Journalists are the main source to spread the latest news flash to the public.
Although
, I believe that most of the reporters are not honest and courage regarding their job. We cannot completely trust them. My preference is justified
further
 in the ensuing paragraphs. In
this
 digital era, the competition in the journalism industry is becoming more complex than ever before. To elaborate
this
, some reporters spread the news report, which did not double checked. It is still possible that some journalist makes some fake news to attract readers' attention and for increasing their popularity. So, some journalist may not honestly for their job. They only need higher position and public attention.
However
, there are still some honest reporters, they show the truth to their readers and have integrity and braveness to their work. They take their professional as the responsibility to the public and not fear for the danger. They even take the risks of their position to show the real news.
Such
 reporter doing an excellent task to place the world at a better stage. To close the discussion, it will be better for us if we do some cross check to news to make sure that the article we read is real or not. Because in the present era, many fake messages are available.
However
, some journalist people doing their honest working to spread truth to ordinary people.
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