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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular in households,why is this so? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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At the present moment, there has been a steep increase in the use of solar
energy
 in homes and industries
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because it has several environmental advantages as well as potentials to meet the growing challenges facing the world. There
are
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is
 a plethora of benefits and advantages associated
wit
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with
 its use
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however
, does that make it devoid of disadvantages?
This
 essay will discuss the benefits
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as well as the pros and cons of solar
energy
 yet to overcome. The sun gives us an endless source of clean
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sustenance
energy
 that can be consumed freely without polluting the environment. Solar
energy
 has gained popularity because it is renewable
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non-polluting, and available planet wide
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reaching areas lacking access to electrical grid
such
 as remote Africa.
To begin
 with, solar
energy
 is a truly renewable source of
energy
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as it can be harnessed in all areas of the world
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besides
 being available
everyday
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every day
. Another chief advantage is that it reduces the amount of money spent on electricity,!
invariably
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Invariably
, bringing electric bills to a drop
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as well as requiring low maintenance cost
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of
sustenability
the property of being sustainable
sustainability
. In spite of these
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,
solar
energy
 does possess some down sides
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with the foremost being its
dependency
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depending
dependent
depends
depend
dependant
 on
weather
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the weather
.
Although
 it can be collected during cloudy and rainy days
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the efficiency of the solar system drops as most solar panels depend on the sun to effectively gather solar
energy
.
Similarly
, the initial cost and installation of
solar system
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the solar system
solar systems
a solar system
 is fairly high
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besides
 storage of
energy
 remains quite expensive. In conclusion
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the use of solar panels
have made
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has made
significant difference
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a significant difference
 to the planet
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polluting far less than other alternative
energy
 source. The increased competition of market prices
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together with the constantly developing technologies of solar panels present an avenue for the cost to become cheaper in the future.
Submitted by Maryviola Okereke on

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