Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Thanks to technological progress,
information
plays a more important role than it used to be in modern times. Some said that it should be
share
Suggestion
shared
as much as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world.
Nevertheless
, others think that some data cannot be shared freely since it is too important or too valuable. In my opinion,
society
can be benefited by sharing data in different fields.
However
, if we
share
some important
information
, it will cause trouble to our
society
. For starters, sharing
information
can benefit our world in many ways.
First
of all, people can combine the it from different fields and create new ways to apply.
For instance
, scientists can use
environment
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environmental
data and agricultural data to predict the food price, so that the government can apply some policies to mitigate poverty and famine issues.
Moreover
, researchers can work more efficiently due to sharing
information
. They do not need to do the same research to get the data, since these are public. If the
information
can be
share
Suggestion
shared
to everyone, it can benefit our
society
and make it be more efficient.
However
, some important
information
should not be shared in public. It may hurt the particular organization or individual, if their important data
is shared
Suggestion
are shared
.
For example
, if a restaurant's special recipes are shared to
public
Suggestion
the public
, its competitors will copy it. So that, these restaurants will lose feature. In the result, no restaurants want to develop
new recipe
Suggestion
new recipes
a new recipe
.
This
phenomenon can
also
happen in other fields, not just happen in restaurants. As the result, If we
share
all
information
, even include the valuable one, it will make our
society
has no motivate to create something new. In conclusion, sharing
information
can make our
society
more efficient.
However
, it can reduce innovation, if we
share
the important or too valuable data
to
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in
public.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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