Some people think that news has no connection with people’s lives; so it is a waste of time to read newspapers and watch television news programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the public is being bombarded with a huge amount of

information

which is usually considered to be irrelevant to people's lives.

Hence

, it is argued that reading the news in newspapers and watching television news programs are wasting time. In my opinion, I totally disagree with

this

idea due to several reasons which will be mentioned in

this

essay. On the one hand, there are some explanations for why people refuse to obtain the news.

the

Suggestion

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Fully explain your ideas

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

320 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Some people think that news has no connection with people’s lives; so it is a waste of time to read newspapers and watch television news programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

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