The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours suggest what should be done about the problem

Dear Sir, I am writing
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letter in connection with a rising problem in my community due to
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poor garbage collection management.
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relation
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this
issue, the number
garbage
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bins installed in the neighbourhood are quite
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by considering the overall population. Few months
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, garbage collecting lorries used to come twice a week to collect rubbish, but for the past few weeks they are only coming once a week which is leading to make worsen
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situation more. Since the waste material bins are overflowing with rubbish, they have become
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heaven for mosquitoes. Many people are getting malaria infection due to
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worried about the health of my family. I would like to suggest that the local council needs to take immediate action by ensuring lorries comes twice a week on people schedule to pick up rubbish to halt
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problem. I would
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recommend that to solve
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term, there should be more garage bins placed which can be funded by charity or local people. I hope you will take immediate measures to solve
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faithfully, Ranbir
sandhu
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Submitted by Ranbir Sandhu on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rubbish collection schedule
  • overflow
  • accumulation
  • attracts pests
  • health hazards
  • unsightly appearance
  • foul odors
  • quality of life
  • reliable
  • frequent
  • community awareness programs
  • waste reduction
  • recycling
  • community composting solutions
  • organic waste
  • installation
  • public bins
  • strategic locations
  • littering
  • residential bins
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