The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours suggest what should be done about the problem

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter in connection with a rising problem in my community due to

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poor garbage collection management.

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relation

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issue, the number

garbage

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bins installed in the neighbourhood are quite

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by considering the overall population. Few months

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, garbage collecting lorries used to come twice a week to collect rubbish, but for the past few weeks they are only coming once a week which is leading to make worsen

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situation more. Since the waste material bins are overflowing with rubbish, they have become

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heaven for mosquitoes. Many people are getting malaria infection due to

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worried about the health of my family. I would like to suggest that the local council needs to take immediate action by ensuring lorries comes twice a week on people schedule to pick up rubbish to halt

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problem. I would

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recommend that to solve

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issue for

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term, there should be more garage bins placed which can be funded by charity or local people. I hope you will take immediate measures to solve

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trouble.

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faithfully, Ranbir

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Ranbir SandhuFri Jul 03 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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8 paragraphs

190 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

rubbish collection schedule
overflow
accumulation
attracts pests
health hazards
unsightly appearance
foul odors
quality of life
reliable
frequent
community awareness programs
waste reduction
recycling
community composting solutions
organic waste
installation
public bins
strategic locations
littering
residential bins

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