Write a letter to a friend telling him about an interesting website you found. Tell your friend – How you found it?How it can help?How you use it?

Dear Johnson,

Last

week I was surfing on the internet about the health and fitness section and came across a website which is quite appealing. I am writing

this

letter to inform you about the site I browsed as you are

fitness

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a fitness

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freak.

Last

week when I went to my doctor for a regular check-up, he advised me to do regular exercise to improve my health. I checked many apps and websites as a lot of content is available on the internet regarding

the

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apply

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health and fitness. While browsing I found a website that not only

help

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helps

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the

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apply

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weight management

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apply

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but

also

keep

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keeps

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a calorie watch along with other activities

such

as water, fasting time and sleep.

Furthermore

, the site suggests the type of exercise and food required in a day based on the provided data by users. In case you find the content interesting, you can enrol in the program by providing your details. After enrolment, your credentials will be sent to your email address, which can be used to

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into

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the program. I hope the information will be worthwhile to you. Kindly reply

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to me

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back in case you find it beneficial. Regards, Barry

Submitted by Anmol on Fri Jul 03 2020

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

197 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to a friend telling him about an interesting website you found. Tell your friend – How you found it?How it can help?How you use it?

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Cigarette companies in Indonesia sponsor sports and music events, but many people believe this should be banned because it encourages young people to smoke. Do you agree with banning this type of sponsorship?

task 2 Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

some people say that the only reason for learninng a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. discuss both views and give your own opinion.