In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

Why every youngsters do need to be tolerated in many things? Many parts of the USA, during a
curfew
, government
do not allow
Suggestion
does not allow
youths to go to
outside
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the outside
without
guardian
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a guardian
, especially after dusk. I believe that they should be under observation when they are alone. Ideas enunciated
further
in my discourse will support my point of view. Though children have rights to enjoy their lives, but their safety is too important.
To begin
with, juveniles cannot take care of themselves, they are still young and they do not understand their ethical responsibilities. They are just like an innocent deer in the jungle who runs everywhere, who plays everywhere and
funs
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fans
everywhere but
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everywhere, but
does not alert against the wild hunter animals. So, keeping
such
candid children free without any parental attention is not a precise decision,
instead
they should be kept under guardian surveillance so that even by mistaken they cannot
do
engage in
make
mistakes. What the
curfew
means? Moving forward, whenever some circumstances are not controlled easily,
such
as riots, pandemic or plague,
Government
Suggestion
the Government
has the only way, to control
this
, which is
curfew
. During the
curfew
, the cities fall under silent. A dog is not
either seen
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seen either
. In
such
condition, anyone can take advantage like robbery, especially after dark. So, allowing
teenagers especially
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teenagers, especially
during the night could lead to danger and sometimes it could life threatening too. If the children accompanied by a custodian,
such
situation can be avoided. If there is any need that requires them to go outside, before sending them outside, we should alert them about
such
conditions. We should provide them some self-
defense
(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies
defence
objects like pepper spray, beeper and tactical flashlight. To summarize, though they are children, we should not make them feel like they are still young,
instead
, we should make them realized of their ethical responsibilities. So that if
such
emergency situation happens like
curfew
, they can take
decision
Suggestion
decisions
a decision
by themselves.
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