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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that increasing the price of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In many countries around the world, a large number of people are getting obese. While some people argue that fast-food should be raising the price, I totally disagree with the idea for the following reasons.
Firstly
, it is undeniable that corpulence is not only for junk food, but
also
 from many issues
such
 as a bad lifestyle, lazy to exercise, or other nutrients. So we know that eating habits are the biggest cause, other aspects as well contribute significantly that people who cannot resolve anything.
Secondly
, a conscious life has directed to the resident becoming overweight.
Although
 individual people understand why fast-food made their body more and more round, they continue to eat it. We cannot deny that fast-food seems to be convenient, but we
also
 can live strong by eating home-cooked meals with many nutrients.
Thirdly
, increase the price of junk food will result in different aspects like consumption of cooking, agricultural harvest, and make the economic decline.
Therefore
, encourage people to exercise is an effective remedy. In conclusion, I completely disagree with the opinion that the price of fasting food can be solved the human obesity problem.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • obesity
  • overweight
  • fattening foods
  • calorie-dense
  • healthier food choices
  • taxation
  • economic implications
  • social implications
  • subsidies
  • nutritional education
  • public health campaigns
  • nanny state
  • individual's right
  • consumer behavior
  • preventative measures
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