Since environmental problems are so serious in many countries, the only possible way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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With the serious environmental degradation in many countries, a number of people subscribe to view that only international cooperation is the essential way to protect the

environment

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. I partly agree with

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assertion; while it may be true that single effort seems to be more effective. On the one hand, it is undeniable that international organisations play vital role in solving the environmental problems. Not only the developing countries, but

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the developed areas nowadays face with alarming issues

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as: deforestation, air pollution, soil erosion and global warming which have a negative effect on human life.

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, international communities should meet together and share their experiences to solve these problems.

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in the world, USA had the largest amount of garbage which Americans disposed. If

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situation were not addressed, people in the US would live in contamination and they might have an incurable illness

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as: poor digestion and lung cancer.

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, the German has been successful at recycling the disposal to reduce the rubbish

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It shared respective method and spread expertise knowledge to help the US and several nations overcome garbage issues. Thanks to communication between nations, the amount of rubbish in the world has been decreased.

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is not to say that individual people have no positive impact on environmental protection. There are many ways to preserve our

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in daily life. If citizens tend to use less car and enjoy the low carbon lifestyle by using a bicycle, it is likely to reduce air pollution significantly.

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, if people pay attention to use save water, power and use reused bags

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of plastic bags, all of which may contribute to

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environment

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environmental

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, it is meaningful to mitigate environmental issues at an individual level. In conclusion, I believe that not on international cooperations but

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citizens in each nation have a responsibility to protect the

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