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In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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Due to an increase of elderly in various parts of the world, leading to the larger amount of money spent on medical management. It is argued that whether the citizen ought to pay for their
health
 insurance in the future
by
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of
with
 their own. Even thought I disagree with
this
 solution to be honest, I
also
 believe there is an undeniable fact of operating private
health
 centre parallel to hospitals by state funds On the one hand, the elderly, especially, who don’t have the ability to make money because of retirements, have the basic right to be treated freely.
Consequently
, the elderly can have treatment without any worries of the affordability of medical care.
In addition
, lacking of governments’ support, public
health
 might be affected by spread diseases. Vietnam during COVID-19 is an example of patients, especially the labour class who has an inability to afford
such
 expensive treatment, were cured under authorities’ sponsor,
as a result
, a whole country is now can be controlled and prevents the virus from spreading.
On the other hand
, the more waves spent on public
health
 care the greater burdens on taxpayers.
This
 could result in the confusion of not well-paid employees and
also
 the deficit of the budget if payments for
this
 sector are not calculated carefully. If so, taxpayers might lose the benefits of have
completely
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completed
 free treatment or even
can not
can not
cannot
 have received the medical system standard when they get older. To sum up, the government should maintain public
health
 centre as for patients who have financial problem.
Also
, to keep intake of state funds stable, private hospitals should be encouraged
too
in the direction of
to
.
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