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Some people believe that technology has made our lives more complex, while others think it has made life easier. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is argued that modern
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 has made human life difficult, whilst others believe it only
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 convenience to individuals.
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 essay will discuss both points of view and give details on why I opine to stand with a later point of view. On the
one
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 hand, many hold the belief that
technology
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 like artificial intelligence, auto-driving cars and much more made
humans
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 dependent.
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, the crowd of lazy, underproductive people is increasing day by day. As devices like computers and smartphones can do any task
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 can think of, the effort and work input by
humans
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 are dropping significantly.
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, since
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 can order groceries online, he/she would not go to the supermarket. Which seems accessible but growing dependency can serve harm to man. So, usage in moderation is the key to utilising the
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.
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 the speed at which we are developing new things are unimaginable and never seen before. Many argue that it only helps
humans
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 to build better lifestyles. Electronic devices like, coffee machines, fridges, and self-driving cars make day-to-day tasks stress-free.
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 helps numerous individuals save time and energy.
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, before the invention of the Chat GPT (software), students had to do lots of research for their projects.
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,
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 can be done at the speed of light without going to the library and doing surveys saving a number of hours and energy.
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, some argue that the development of
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 has affected human life in a harmful way as they are becoming non-dependent, which makes
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 lazy and not productive. With the proper and limited amount of usage, it can be a great companion to
humans
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 for their betterment.

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Task Response
Make sure to clearly define the main points in your introduction and address both views throughout the essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
Vary your sentence structures to enhance readability and flow.
Task Achievement
The essay presents a balanced discussion of both views, which is essential for this type of task.
Task Achievement
Good use of examples to illustrate points made, such as the reliance on technology for grocery shopping and research.
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