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Some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to the society.other argue that being citizen involves more responsibilities.Discuss what is your opinion?

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People and societies play a vital role in the growth and prosperity of any given country. Some often believe that paying taxes is the only responsibility of the people while others opine that they have more responsibilities, and I agree with the later.
This
 essay will discuss both the views and share my thoughts. On one side, it is often believed by some that contributing to society
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 by paying tax in a stipulated time frame so that local communities have enough funds to improve transportation by improving roads, rails and air travel. In some of the countries, where tax rates are high, provide free health care and primary education to all the citizens is yet another reason people think they are contributing to a significant extent to the country where they live. On the other side, many people argue that people should take up more responsibilities in taking care of the environment and
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 agree with the same.
Firstly
, every individual should do their bit to protect the environment by conserving natural resources, taking measures to consume biodegradable materials where possible, which reduces the earth, water and air pollution. Global warming is a bigger concern, and each and everyone should do their bit as government alone cannot do much without everyone's support. Most of these problems cannot
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 solved by just having money, and all people should support the cause to make a better living
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 society.
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, participating in volunteering activities like teaching in schools, planting trees, protecting endangered species, which affects the food cycle by joining various NGO's helps the country in a significant way.
Finally
, having social concern to other people and showing empathy to other people would create healthy societies and improve the nation. To conclude, despite people having a different opinion, I think that citizens have many responsibilities
such
 as protecting the environment and create a healthy society is outmost significant other than paying taxes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental
  • development
  • public services
  • social contract
  • financially support
  • civic responsibility
  • communal activities
  • engaged in the political process
  • advocating
  • enriches
  • actively participate
  • political process
  • less fortunate
  • environmentally responsible
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