Some people say that the main envoronmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Others say that are more important environmental problems.Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Most of us believe that nowadays we have to face with a big issue and

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the extinction of flora and fauna, while being others think that

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is not the only problem in

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day.

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is a hotly debated topic that often divides opinions and from my point of view we have to take care of our environment, even if in the world there are many problems that need to be solved.

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of all, the beauty of a country stays in her nature and species of animals.Even if we, like humans, need to be modern, and to progress

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we do not have to forget the importance of plants and trees and to try to preserve as much as we can.

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, a forest ensures us the fresh air that we need to inspire every day, ensure the resistance of the soil and trees absorb the excess of water from the rains.Without there trees, many disasters happened like flooding.

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many species of animals maintained equilibrium in nature, a good example is a wild animal who hunt at various of others species of animals and in

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way it prevents them from multiplying in excess.

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modern world is in continuous development and

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lead to many environmental problems like air pollution, loose of traditional villages because of development of too many cities. The government has to face

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and to try to resolve all the environmental problems with the same importance and not to put in

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problems. Taking everything into consideration, I believe that if we protect our fauna and flora we already solve many problems from our environment.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 6.5

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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4 paragraphs

280 words

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biodiversity
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