People tend to work longer hours nowadays. Working long hours has a negative effect on themselves, their family and the society so working long hours should be restricted. Do you agree or disagree.

It has become apparent in recent years that the extension of working long hours is being

common

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more common

than ever before. It is argued that the government should limit the working hours, due to an adverse impact on the employee’s individual, their family as well as the community. In my opinion, I strongly agree with

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statement. In the past, a person normally worked 8 hours per day. Average daily working nowadays,

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,

have increased

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has increased

significantly to ten or twenty hours. To the employees,

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issue deeply

effects

have an effect upon

affects

their health, and the productive. Workers who are so immersed in their job have a tendency to live a high pressure and stressful life style.

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situation

rises

come into existence; take on form or shape

arises

a risk of suffering from physical as well as psychological problems,

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as anxiety disorders or stroke. These illness

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leads

to more sick leaves and low performances at work, and the low productivity. The workers,

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, are likely to

loose

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

lose

their opportunities to promote. The frequency of long working hours

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has a

negtive

characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features

negative

drawsback

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draws back

on the families and communities. When the employee spends a lot of

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in their

worlplace

a place where work is done

workplace

, the

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for their family will be reduced.

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, the relationship among the members are greatly weakened and the conflicts as well as the

musunderstanding

putting the wrong interpretation on

misunderstanding

are likely to appear. In terms of the society, many studies pointed out that a person’s productive and concentration in a day is limited. The workers,

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, cannot pay attention to their job after working long hours and it affects

tremedously

extremely

tremendously

to the company as well as society in

generall

applying to all or most members of a category or group

general

.

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, overworked people do not devote

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to voluntary activities which brings benefits

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to

the society. In conclusion, I strongly believe that the authorities should

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restrict

the

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of working because of its severe impact on

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employees

the employee

, their family bonds, and their community.