The government should not spend money on arts as this money would be better spent on other projects like sanitation and infrastructure. Do you agree with the statement.

It is believed that
investing
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investment
investor
funds in
arts
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the arts
is not advantageous and there are more pressing issues on earth that are needed to be addressed by the higher authorities. I completely disagree with the above statement and believe that
art
is worth every single penny that are spent on them.
This
essay shall present pertinent description and instances of the view. There are several reasons why
government
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the government
should spend money on
art
. The most preponderant one lies in the fact that
Art
reflects the culture of the
country
and promotes better understanding of the culture and
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
heritage among people. There are numerous museum all over the world preserved by the
government
and people who are
intrested
having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
can visit there free of cost as maintenance is undertaken by the
government
.
For instance
,
canada
a nation in northern North America; the French were the first Europeans to settle in mainland Canada
Canada
, USA, Australia have
arts
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art
museum all over the
country
that exhibits ancient artefacts.
In addition
to
this
, allocating money to the development and sustenance of
art
boosts
country's economy
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the country's economy
.
Art
galleries can attract tourists from all over the globe and in turn generates huge revenue.
Morover
in addition
Moreover
, the
art
sector employs many people.
For example
, artists from various genres have huge fan followings and they are a vital part of various
art
shows which in turn provide employment to hundreds of people. Without
government
funding many
art
form will die and
this
will be
a
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an
extreme loss of the
country
. To conclude, though infrastructure and sanitation have enormous
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
and needs to be
addressed but
Accept comma addition
addressed, but
not the expense of
art
because
art
has its own value and profits to both people and the
country
.
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