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FAMOUS PEOPLE ON THE INTERNET CAN SOMETIMES INFLUENCE YOUNG PEOPLE. WHAT IS YOUR OPINION?

Nowadays as
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Nowadays, as
 we know many famous people become
influencers
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influences
 for society on the
internet
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. It is
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 argued that it contributes positively to the
community especially
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community, especially
 to young people. In our opinion, we firmly believe that popular people can
influence
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 young people on the
internet
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 because of teens often idolize and want to be like them, and
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 popular people usually show positive
content
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 on social media. The
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 important reason, famous people can sometimes
influence
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 young people on the
internet
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 because teenagers often adore and even want to be like them. As we know famous people mostly have a good income and
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 a special attraction for young people.
Therefore
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, teenagers make their idols as
influencers
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influences
 in daily life.
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, an entrepreneur who can
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 young people, his name is Jack Ma. He has his own charm to build the personal branding of young people.
Thus
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, many teenagers are affected by
influencers
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influences
 so that they idolize and want to be them.
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 with, young people can be influenced by famous people because of their positive
content
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.
Furthermore
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, on the
internet
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, it is important that
content
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 is positive
content
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 and a lot of
content
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 creator makes positive
content
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 on social media
such
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 as Instagram, Twitter,
Youtube
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YouTube
, and the other.
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, they share their
content
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 for everyone.
However
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, positive
content
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 can affect young people quickly because it is easily accepted among them. To conclude, it is certainly true that many famous people can affect teenagers on the
internet
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 due to teens often idolize and want to be like them and famous people usually provide positive
content
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 on social media. These two useful points can make teens influenced by famous people on the
internet
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, many of whom tend to want to follow famous people who
influence
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 them.

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Your opinion

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