An English – speaking friend wants to spend two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •Offer to find somewhere to stay •Give advice about what to do •Give information about what clothes to bring

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Dear Michel I hope you are doing absolutely fantastic! I'm beyond thrilled to hear that you're planning to visit our neck of the woods for two weeks in October. Montreal is the best place to stay where you can find an Airbnb or hotels at cheap prices. when you're here you've got to check out Montreal. It's a hidden gem with a laid-back atmosphere and charm all its own. You can explore historical building streets, check out local markets and indulge in some mouthwatering cuisine at the cosy cafes and restaurants. Trust me you will fall in love with
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place! In terms of clothing, the weather in October can be unpredictable. I'd recommend packing a jacket, sweater and comfortable shoes will be your best bet. Oh, and don't forget your camera to capture all the magical moments! Please let me know if you need more advice or help from my side. Yours truly, Vairag
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coherence and cohesion
Consider organizing your ideas into distinct paragraphs to improve the logical flow and clarity of your letter. For instance, separate the accommodation information, activities, and clothing advice into different paragraphs.
task achievement
Provide a few more specifics about local attractions or activities your friend might enjoy, to enhance the depth and completeness of your response.
coherence and cohesion
The letter greets the friend warmly and ends with a courteous closing.
task achievement
The writing tone is very friendly and engaging, perfect for a letter to a friend.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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