You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to enquire about the technology seminar happening in Canada,

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month. By way of introduction, my name is Ana, and I am currently studying technology automation

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School of Business, India. I hope you will be able to provide me with insightful information regarding the program and the costs. Let me explain in detail, what I am looking for. I would like to participate in the seminar, because of the breakthrough technology sessions that were conducted

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year as well, and it was a remarkable success. Not to mention, it intrigued my interest, and would like to apprehend the advantages of the program; it will aid me in contemplating my decision wisely. While Canada is a new country for me, and I am not sure of the places where I can put up,

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, I presume that we will be provided with the accommodation facilities in the same hotel where

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will be conducted. Could you please confirm and let me know if the accommodation is to be arranged separately by us, and the estimated costs

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like to know about the exact dates of the conference

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since I have semi-finals which are expected to end by mid-

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. To recapitulate, It will be great if you can let me know the details constituting the cost of the program in

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as it will aid me in planning my trip effectively. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Ana

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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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