Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person´s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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Style of dressing is different in each country

around of the world

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around the world

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, society has many thoughts about custom and personalities of

people according

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people, according

to kind of wear. To my way of thinking, I do not agree with that. In

this

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essay, I will argue my view about of as the people can become to judged just for the clothes.

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, politicians generally have the highest positions within society. For

this

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reason, they are always wearing elegant and expensive clothes. Whereby, people tend to think that they are smart, disciplined, friendly and honoured.

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this

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is false. To illustrate

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, in Colombia there are 260 politicians into of the cabinet, but more eighty percent

are

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corrupt and arrogant.

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, Colombia is positioned as one of the poorest countries in America. Because of, people choose politicians just for their physical appearance.

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elite’s

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elite

athletes

wear sportswear

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wear, sportswear

all the time.

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, people think that they could be no polite and lazy because

sportspeople

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only think about playing.

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, Roger Federer

currently is the best

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is currently the best

tennis player. He has won many competitions.

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, he has always been questioned for

him

male possessive pronoun

his

clothes. Despite of, many people do not know that he has a foundation to support African’s children regarding to their education and food.

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, he

can be recognize

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can recognize

can be recognized

as a generous and diligent man,

also

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as a hard worker. To sum up, for people the way of dressing will always be important and they can get a wrong opinion about of the culture and behaviour of the people.

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this

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aspect is not enough to opine with respect to someone´s personality.

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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