Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person´s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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Style of dressing is different in each country

around of the world

Suggestion

around the world

However

, society has many thoughts about custom and personalities of

people according

Accept comma addition

people, according

to kind of wear. To my way of thinking, I do not agree with that. In

this

essay, I will argue my view about of as the people can become to judged just for the clothes.

Firstly

, politicians generally have the highest positions within society. For

this

reason, they are always wearing elegant and expensive clothes. Whereby, people tend to think that they are smart, disciplined, friendly and honoured.

However

this

is false. To illustrate

this

, in Colombia there are 260 politicians into of the cabinet, but more eighty percent

are

Suggestion

corrupt and arrogant.

As a result

, Colombia is positioned as one of the poorest countries in America. Because of, people choose politicians just for their physical appearance.

In addition

elite’s

Suggestion

elite

athletes

wear sportswear

Accept comma addition

wear, sportswear

all the time.

Therefore

, people think that they could be no polite and lazy because

sportspeople

only think about playing.

For instance

, Roger Federer

currently is the best

Suggestion

is currently the best

tennis player. He has won many competitions.

However

, he has always been questioned for

him

male possessive pronoun

his

clothes. Despite of, many people do not know that he has a foundation to support African’s children regarding to their education and food.

Thus

, he

can be recognize

Suggestion

can recognize

can be recognized

as a generous and diligent man,

also

as a hard worker. To sum up, for people the way of dressing will always be important and they can get a wrong opinion about of the culture and behaviour of the people.

Hence

this

aspect is not enough to opine with respect to someone´s personality.

Submitted by Mauricio Vargas on Wed Jul 15 2020

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