You eat at your college canteen every time. You think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the principal. Discuss what you like about the canteen What you do not like about it Suggest improvements
Dear Mam,
I am a
second year
Bachelor of Science student. I wanted to draw your attention to the inconvenience that most of the students have been facing in the canteen.
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second-year
First
of all, I wanted to say that me
and my friends extremely appreciate the changes you have been
brought to the mess. I like the canteen food and the customer service has been commendable every time I go there.
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I
However
, long lineups have always been a huge inconvenience, as you know the recess time for every class and section is same
throughout the college and getting something to eat in those 45 minutes of break, before the Correct article usage
the same
next
class starts is
quite stressful.
In my opinion, half time for every section should be at least 5-10 minutes of a difference to the other.
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are
This
would make a huge difference and getting food would not be as stressful as it is now.
Yours Faithfully,
kamini
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Kamini
Submitted by Kamini Nayyar on
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.