Recent research has confirmed that “human activity has become the greatest threat to plant and animal life". Why do you think this has happened? How can we reduce our impact on the natural world?

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It has been recently reported that excessive human activities on earth are driving wildlife and plant to the brink of collapse.
This
essay aims to discuss the causes and suggest some ways to solve the problem. There are two main explanations for human involvement in the crisis of species on earth.
To begin
with, urban expansion and the demand for more agricultural land lead to the destruction of habitats that belong to the thousands of animals and plant at
first
.
For instance
, farmers in Amazon jungle destroy forests to make room for planting soybean and raising livestock, not to mention that other logging operation that provide timber and paper products. Without the forest which offer
shelters
Suggestion
shelter
and food sources, wild creatures will gradually die out.
In addition
, man-made pollution
also
contributes to the loss of species.
In particular
, industrial wastewater and other toxic chemical pollutants into the water and kill off the fish; what is more serious, marine life in the ocean might be completely damaged in the accident of oil spills. To address
this
matter, it is necessary to introduce effective laws. One approach is to protect the significant natural environment on which many specifies depend for their survival. To be specific, the authority punishes those activities,
such
as hunting, farming and fishing in the protection zone, to say nothing of destroying the forest.
Additionally
, the public should not only be informed to be aware of the consequences that can be caused
as a result
of environmental damage and pollutant but
also
be trained about the various methods to tackle the concern.
For instance
, Governments and businesses could appeal to people to recycle household goods or establish volunteer associations to supervise the criminal act that damage the environment. In conclusion, the rapid expansion of human activities
can inadvertently is
Suggestion
can inadvertently be
becoming a vast threaten of species for many reasons.
However
, with proper attention and actions,
this
thorny issue might be tackled.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • habitat destruction
  • biodiversity
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • overexploitation
  • renewable energy sources
  • sustainable agriculture
  • forestry
  • pollution controls
  • waste management
  • conservation efforts
  • protected areas
  • environmental contamination
  • sustainable lifestyles
  • policy changes
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