Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In recent decades, it is often debated topic, how success has been judged, on what basis a person can be successful, whether it is physical

strength

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or cognitive

strength

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, which leads to being successful in the

sport

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. In my opinion,

both

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are useful as per their need, which is required in different situations. I shall discuss in

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essay, how

both

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have an equal weight age. Talking about physical

strength

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, which is essential when it comes to safeguarding, our own selves in the time of danger or to rescue someone from the threat or win any tournament

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game

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. It is necessary to be physically strong fore.g., a

sport

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like wrestling, who has a mandatory requirement to maintain a suitable weight, in order to get qualified. Where a wrestler’s physical

strength

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, has given

importance so

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importance, so

that he

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she can use his physical

strength

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to win the

game

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, their training is very rigid, and they have to on a strict diet. If they are not following the mentioned diet, they won't be able to play for the team. As in wrestling, if a

player

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is not strong enough, he

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she won't be able to keep up, not even till 1 round, and any injury can happen while playing.

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this

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, the

player

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also

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needs to use their mental ability to win the

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, when it is concerned with mental

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, sports like Kabaddi, and Football. All these games

required mindful

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required, mindful

strategies along with physical

strength

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. As all these sports required a lot of tricks and patience to win. Fore.g., Kabaddi, where a

player

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has to be strongly determined, and tough to beat the opponent players. There is a lot of chasing required in Kabaddi and Football. The opponent team can burn the

player

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mentally

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mentality

, and if a

player

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is not able to assimilate, and tackle with them calmly, He

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she has a possibility to lose the

game

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. That's why getting selected in

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type of sports required mental

strength

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to cope up with any kind of stress or failure. To conclude, I personally feel,

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the qualities

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physical and mental health are equally required to be successful in any

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also

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it holds its own importance when it comes to any

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and

both

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go hand in hand.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

375 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

physical conditioning
athleticism
physical training
muscle strength
mental resilience
psychological preparedness
mental toughness
confidence
precision
focus
mental strategies
mental fortitude
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