Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent decades, it is often debated topic, how success has been judged, on what basis a person can be successful, whether it is physical
strength
or cognitive strength
, which leads to being successful in the sport
. In my opinion, both
are useful as per their need, which is required in different situations. I shall discuss in this
essay, how both
have an equal weight age.
Talking about physical strength
, which is essential when it comes to safeguarding, our own selves in the time of danger or to rescue someone from the threat or win any tournament/
game
. It is necessary to be physically strong fore.g., a sport
like wrestling, who has a mandatory requirement to maintain a suitable weight, in order to get qualified. Where a wrestler’s physical strength
, has given importance so
that heAccept comma addition
importance, so
/
she can use his physical strength
to win the game
. Moreover
, their training is very rigid, and they have to on a strict diet. If they are not following the mentioned diet, they won't be able to play for the team. As in wrestling, if a player
is not strong enough, he/
she won't be able to keep up, not even till 1 round, and any injury can happen while playing. Besides
this
, the player
also
needs to use their mental ability to win the game
.
Similarly
, when it is concerned with mental strength
, sports like Kabaddi, and Football. All these games required mindful
strategies along with physical Accept comma addition
required, mindful
strength
. As all these sports required a lot of tricks and patience to win. Fore.g., Kabaddi, where a player
has to be strongly determined, and tough to beat the opponent players. There is a lot of chasing required in Kabaddi and Football. The opponent team can burn the player
mentally
, and if a Suggestion
mentality
player
is not able to assimilate, and tackle with them calmly, He/
she has a possibility to lose the game
. That's why getting selected in such
type of sports required mental strength
to cope up with any kind of stress or failure.
To conclude, I personally feel, both
the qualities i
.refers to the speaker or writer
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e
physical and mental health are equally required to be successful in any Suggestion
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sport
also
it holds its own importance when it comes to any sport
and both
go hand in hand.Submitted by Samiksha Singh on
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