The tendency for news reports in the media to focus on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful to the individual and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that news coverage is willing to focus more on bad news. While I disagree with the statement which broadcasting news about climate changes and natural disasters have
harmful
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a harmful effect
harmful effects
effect
on the person and society
.
It is indisputable that, on the one hand, bad news has a detrimental effect
on both person and society
. In fact, senile people with watching the news are susceptible to different kinds of illnesses such
as cardiovascular and respiratory diseases, having deleterious
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a deleterious effect
deleterious effects
effect
on a person. Admittedly, watching bad news also
has a negative effect
on children, causing mentally and behaviorally norm which has a violent treatment. The more children and senility follow bad news; the most detrimental effect
will exist in the community.
On the other hand
, reporting bad news for instance
civil wars and natural disasters such
as flood and earthquake contributes to people spontaneously help environment which exposed to these issues. Not only does it vitally important to people, but also
it has a positive consequence on society
. Therefore
, this
help of people, in turn, cause the rate of dying are highly likely decrease significantly
. It is rare for people not to help Suggestion
significant
signed
signing
society
, yet it is surely essential that the public are kept informed about some of the bad things which are happening in the world. The negative news helps people to keep abreast of the latest available disasters. The more people assist society
in an ecological crisis or climate change, the more highly likely the consequences remarkably reduce.
In conclusion, I disagree with the fact that bad news has a crippling effect
on people and there are valid arguments on both sides of the controversy; despite all negative consequences, the positive influence is vitally important either in society
or people.Submitted by Niusha Razavi on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite