In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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countries have provided in the supermarket
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from all over the
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. I strongly believe
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is a good development because people will have healthier choices.
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,
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brought from everywhere to be put under one roof would enhance people's choices for healthier
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. Countries who had desert lands cannot grow all kinds of vegetables and fruits, and
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that a person would have fewer options that might not be healthy.
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, in Saudi Arabia, because of its nature, they import a huge amount of
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, particularly fruits, from the U.S. And
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helps their inhabitants' well-being.
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access to a variety of foods from around the
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can introduce people to different cultures.
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, imported
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gives humans feelings of satisfaction towards their country. To
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,When a citizen sees the different types of imported
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simply in a market, they feel appreciated and want to do more for their city.
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to that, they do not have the need to travel just for
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because they already have it.Based on the BBC article about the U.K. citizens' feelings for their country shows that they feel proud mostly because of
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choices .
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, the global trade of
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can boost economies by supporting agriculture and creating jobs both locally and internationally. In conclusion, easy access to
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from all over the
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is, in my opinion, a positive development because it can help humans to have healthier options and
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feel satisfaction towards their country.

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The essay presents some good ideas about the benefits of imported food.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrition
  • cultural exposure
  • competitive markets
  • economic boost
  • employment opportunities
  • carbon footprint
  • environmental impact
  • local produce
  • food security
  • global supply chain
  • sustainable practices
  • consumer choice
  • market dynamics
  • price competition
  • agricultural sector
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