Task 2: Some people focus on news in their country, while others think it is more important to be aware of international news. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In modern days, national news is increasingly focused on while others believe international news is

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noteworthy.

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each has its own merits, I believe both should be concerned about for the comprehensive view of the world. To start with, reading news in their country would help citizens be aware of daily situations, especially about crime.

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, these people would be more likely to take precautionary measures

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as securing pepper spray or trying to stay near the police.

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, in a recent study about how the news would affect citizens’ life in the USA, states that have more people who are cautious of local news result in less crime rate compared to states that do not.

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, international news might be beneficial in people’s planning, particularly when going to another country or investing in another country’s market.

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, having known about

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information in a foreign country via news, people would beware of war or weather conditions,

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the appropriate changes in their plans. Two cases in point are in Iran, where the UK war has led to

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deterioration in their currency and in Australia where ozone perforation is

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a problem.

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, before investing in another country’s market, a company, especially an international one should know about that country’s economy, thereby having

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precise investment. In fact, if they do not read about,

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, foreign trends, they cannot devise proper plans that would help them to flourish. In conclusion, while national news would help citizens aware of daily situations like crime, international news benefits them in planning, especially when going abroad or investing in another country’s market.

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, I firmly believe that people should be aware of both types of news, thereby keeping track of

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important knowledge.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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296 words

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