Some experts suggested that cyclists should have to pass a exam before riding on cycle for road safety. To what extended do you agree or disagree?

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There is no denying the fact that cycling ride is a popular sport.

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it is a commonly held belief that before cycling an exam for

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should be implemented for

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safety, there is

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an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that suggestion is not sufficient to decrease the likelihood of

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incidents.

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with, cycling is one of the common transportation methods not because it is a cheap option, but because it

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does not have an adverse impact on our environment.

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, despite its popularity, governments did not construct designated paths for

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; which forced them to utilize the car roads, and that was a main factor in increasing

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incidents.

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suggestion could be beneficial to minimize these ratios and to educate

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about

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instructions. Another point to consider is that implementing

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idea may cost the government extra expenses that should spent on

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development.

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, it could lead to a significant increase in the car's drivers because people tend to avoid exams which will make a bad situation even worse. It is

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possible to say that it will restrict individuals' freedom by banning cycling unless they go through some exams and that could be seen by the growing number of people who encourage their willingness and freedom. In conclusion, despite people having different views, I believe that legitimate a mandatory exam on

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will not tackle

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incidents and governments should regulate

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situation with other solutions in order to solve

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problem.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Road safety
Compliance
Cycling etiquette
Safety measures
Mandatory testing
Implementation challenges
Public resistance
Environmental impact
Health benefits
Cycling infrastructure
Awareness campaigns
Voluntary workshops
Regulations
Proponents
Opponents
Traffic rules

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Fully explain your ideas

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