Human activity has damaged the environment all around the world. Some people think that humans cannot stop damaging the planet where as other believe that we can alter our behaviour and future damage. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, major human actions are affecting
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the environment
adversely. From the perspective of some people, the
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done by humanity is endless. Others,
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, think that if people control their actions, they can tackle issues and prevent them. Personally, I find the latter more convincing. Those who support the idea of irreversible
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to the
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have their own justifications.
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of all, the harmful changes that are taking place are not always related to human behaviour, they might be natural.
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, natural disasters
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as floods, earthquakes, tornadoes, eruptions may harm the condition of the planet more than us, humans.
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,
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those kind of terrible events kills on average 60 thousand people per year, globally.
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, today more and more people are indifferent to the cleanliness of the
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, which means that their attention to cleanliness has declined.
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, in the streets you can see people throwing garbage on the ground.
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, others believe it is the duty of everyone to protect nature, improve the ecological and sanitary-epidemiological
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, prevent environmental
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and increase the ecological culture of the humanity, and I agree.
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, creating some special classes about human
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on
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the environment
or sticking posters about the nature preserve on the walls of public areas. Another reason for
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opinion is the condition of the earth is directly related to the life of man and other living organisms.To be more precise,
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group of people considers that humans should preserve the nature, not for only themselves,
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animals. In conclusion, while some people have some reasons to believe stopping harmful actions of human is impossible. I tend to think that people can change
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condition together.
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