Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss these views and give your opinions.

According to some, to become a good member of

society children

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society, children

should be educated at school whereas others hold the view that

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decent

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behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

could be

thought

impart skills or knowledge to

taught

by parents.

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families and schools have their own teaching methods, it is my personal belief that they can share training of social values with each other.

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of all, Children’s

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behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

can be affected by the people whom they spend their time with. They try to imitate their parents’

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behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

from birth to preschool since they spend the considerable amount of time with their parents.

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, some social

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviours

such

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as respecting to the laws or elderly people can be easily thought

to

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of

children under preschool ages.

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, mothers and fathers are the primary teachers of children and are likely to become a

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model for them.

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, the more respect parents have for social norms, the more influence they have on the children’s social

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behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

in the near future.

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, children will enthusiastically experience the new world at primary school. Not only

teachers but

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teachers, but

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the peers might have considerable impact on their

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

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as they encounter other children of different character, personality and family backgrounds.

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, tutors are bound to play a key

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in

development

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the development

of social interaction

of

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with

children. For one thing, the only child families are wide spreading, for another, school can be the only place to adapt yourself with a variety of personality traits.

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, the

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of teachers is the same as parents in educating social norms. By way of conclusion, schools are the

second

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home of children and it seems to me that teachers and parents have an equally important

role

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in the societal

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviours

behaviour

of children.