Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Sports always attracts large audience around the globe. Many local and international companies are offering sponsorship of sports and are using it as a medium to advertise their products. While, these sponsorships unlock the true potential of any sportsman and

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increases the sales of a product through sports advertisements, there are disadvantages too. One evident advantage is that these companies provide free equipment’s to the players, which

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would have been impossible to buy.

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allows players to completely focus on sports and forget any financial burden. Ultimately,

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would bring the best out of the individuals in sports. There are many examples

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as Messi in football, Jordon in Basketball who have hugely benefited by these sponsorships.

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, advertisements through successful players will enable greater exposure of the company products and its brands to the public.

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, the revenue of the company is increased.

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, advertisements from companies selling harmful products

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as tobacco and cannabis through sports players, would attract youngsters to try these products, which would be injurious to their health.

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situation can be avoided by banning advertisements from

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companies.

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, advertisements through unsuccessful players, would negatively affect the product sales.

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, the growth of the company is directly linked to the success of the players. To conclude, advertisements are the best form to market and sell a product. Companies should sponsor sports teams and/ or events as it helps both sports individuals and sponsoring companies.

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, the companies that sell harmful products to health must be banned from sponsoring sports events.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Sports sponsorship
financial support
athletes
brand visibility
awareness
commercialization
integrity
dependencies
corporate funds
unethical practices
strategic partnerships
communal relations
promote healthy lifestyles

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