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The advance in air travel are focused only in first-class and this seems to have left others with no benefits at all. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that the only positive developments in
air
travel
 have been in
first
class
 leaving others with no advantages. In my opinion, while
first
class
 passengers certainly enjoy a premium service, most advances
benefit
Suggestion
benefits
 all passengers. It is true that developments in
air
travel
 can easily be seen in
first
class
 in terms of premium, private facilities and services. People travelling
first
class
 are now able to enjoy
pull
Suggestion
pulling
 out beds and a private area where they can work with power outlets and wifi connections. Some airlines even offer
first
class
 passengers a suite including a personal inflight chef and private shower. Other companies offer lounges where premium passengers can mingle and network during the flight.
However
, it cannot be said that the budget traveller has not benefited from the developments in commercial
air
travel
.
Although
 the seating area may still be cramped causing
passengers
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passenger
 discomfort, particularly on long haul flights, the developments have allowed them to
also
 enjoy technological luxuries
such
 as individual inflight entertainment options.
Furthermore
, the food offered to budget commercial travellers has vastly improved,
although
 admittedly
this
 is only available on long haul flights.
Finally
, regardless of
class
, all people travelling by plane can now enjoy better security and safety on board the plane due to advanced technology in flying.
For example
, the number of fatal
air
 crashes over the
last
 couple of decades has fallen dramatically. Another benefit that can be appreciated by all is the speed at which modern jet planes are now able to reach their destinations making distant
travel
 more frequent and faster. In conclusion, even though
first
class
enjoy
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enjoys
 some extra perks, the technological advances in
air
travel
 can be shared by everyone regardless of the price of their ticket.
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